He doesn't love her any more

by ashley rose   Nov 6, 2006


Warm tears stream down her face,
once looking for her long embrace,
but the fact was she couldn't face,
was looking at his handsome face.

She loved him so,
but he didn't even know,
she still couldn't face,
his handsome face.

When she told him she loved him
he looked as if didn't care,
but in his heart he really cared.

Months have passed,
she's still cared,
but the boy wasn't there,
he didn't love her anymore.

Years have passed,
and still she cared,
until he and told her he didn't care,
now she sits all alone,
with the warm tears streaming down her face,
still looking for that long embrace.

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  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    I really liked it. I thought it had a good rhythm. Just a tip, especially for your quotes. Use capital letters. In a poem, at the beginning of each line and in your quotes when you say I.

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This was a nice poem..but to me, the flow was off and your rhymes were to cliche and in some of them you used the same word..also it kindof confused me when you said he cared deep inside and then all of a sudden he didnt love her anymore...well i think it could be fixed up a bit,,so i give you a 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    I really like the idea of this one, but i do have a suggestion...some of it seems kinda choppy, like you forgot a word or something... if that was fixed it would definitely be better! but it was still very sweet and overall quite good!

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