Loss

by kristin   Nov 7, 2006


Taking a knife
Looking at the blade
its shiny rough edges
going through my vein

Here i am lookin at the bloody knife
wonderin am i going to die?
lookin in the mirror wonderin still why?
watching the blood running down my arm
getting dizzy dropping the knife

laying on the ground tryin too stay alive going through the agony and the pain of losing you

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Good detail
    and feeling
    all id have to say is to make it longer
    it would benifit
    great job
    4/5