Aww so sad and cute, but true for so many friendships. one thing i didnt like-You rip my heart out and let it rot.
Stomp on it and walk all over it.
It doesn't matter anyways.
You don't care I scream and cry. the rhyme scheme here became inconsistant. its not abcb like the rest, other than that the last line makes no sense. Back when before high school..
i'd lose the when, but then its too short, so just try to adjust that.

x.x:Lauren

That's a beautiful poem and the sad thing is I'm sure a LOT of people can relate to it... keep up the good work