Very good. powerful and emotional. good job! keep adding on, cos it makes me want to know more!

I like it. I think that you should a little more to it to give it a little more depth. 5/5

I really liked this. Short, but intersting. I like this style of writing very much. Nice work.

This is good......& about my poem "President", yeah, I do feel that way.....I feel like, he has a hard job and he's doing the best he can, good job on this poem
xoxo

Erm...4/3 words! don't change it!