That was really good I loved it. You are very talented! keep it up! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

WOW. that left me speechless. i really really like this...and think that people should read this. drinking and driving is dangerous for everyone not just urself. wow...excellent work 5/5

I entered the contest you put this in too! This was a great poem with the most original take on this subject I've seen. By far one of your best, though all I've read that you've written is excellent. You have amazing work, and I can't wait to see where you'll be with it just a few months down the line!
Great job, keep writing!
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Comment #4:
That was EXCELLENT! Really touching! And it came from a different perspective too. Really great and keep it up!
~Midnight Sun