by alka mendiratta Nov 7, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The sun shines every morning |
by Em
Portrays such a wonderful image in my mind. Beautifully written, 5/5. Em x |
by Ingrid
Let me act in such a way |
This ones good :) |
by Letty
I almost forgot' You should use some punctuation please. lol But it still was excellent. |
by Letty
BEAUTIFUL! I loved this poem. You have done an excellent job. I love the wonderful message that you convey in this piece also. The flow was lovely and the fact that it's a free verse makes it even more excellent. I have a few suggestions though.In the fourth stanza, last line you wrote: |