Wow this is really good too! i loved the wording you used..it really painted a picture...and it just really sucked me in. great work 5/5

Awee, that was really good! I really liked that one. I often attempt to write war poems but can never finish them. It's a hard subject && I have to say you did an amazing job on it.

"Breathe Another Breath For Me,
Fight Another War,
Save Another Life Today,
To Prove What Were Fighting For."

^^ I loved that stanza (:

5/5

-Jenna.

Comment #3:
That was really sad. I love poems about war though because it really describes everything everyone's feeling at this time. Great job, again.
~Midnight Sun