You pretty well hit the nail on the head. As a sufferer of insomnia, myself, this is accurate.

Sleepless nights, tossing and turning.

The flow was good. And I liked the topic.

Keep it up.
Jeannie

Wow i just assumed that you had insomia while i was reading this. I dont personally dont have insomnia (love sleep too much lol) so i can only imagine the sheer hell that it must be. You describe the kinda frustration that i would think would be associated with insomnia. Another great piece.

Kelly
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I have no clue what insomnia iz but i do know who ever can conqure life without rest deserves something in return... i myself love sleep

I suffer from insomnia, and that's a bummer. you did do it justice, i thought the rhyming was right on, not forced at all. imagery was very vivid as well. 5/5