Accidentally Broken

by gracefulangel   Nov 7, 2006


I wish to him to let me be free
To stop the tears falling out of me
I told him to stop
F**cking with my heart
But he never understood
She wasnt that smart
She doesnt know how to control her rage
Or stop herself from making mistakes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Short, sweet, and great. This seems to me like one of those childhood hymnals you'd memorize in church..except it's depressing. pretty good nonetheless though ;)

    As for my poem, I release my own emotions when I write. I don't care what people learn when I write, as long as I'm venting my emotion. That was written during one of my 'dark' periods..so yes, it was from my own depression.

    Again, great job on this. keep it up ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Short yet very powerful.
    It had a good opening and you ended it well.
    5/5
    *Gem*

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