Comments : Apple Of Her Daddy's Eye

  • 18 years ago

    by kori

    Is this true?
    are you really pregnant? if you are good luck. i liked reading this, the flow was nice. if this is true dont worry, mistakes happen and i think you should tell your dad because he will help you and understand.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlyn

    I really enjoyed reading this one seeing since I only have a father so I could compair to it.... 5/5 As always.. GREAT JOB!!

    sincerely,
    Katlyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ I liked this long one, it was so sad. You have a great flow. +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    This poem is so great! I actaully did not expect that ending. I kept wishing for a happy ending the whole way through even though i knew it was in the sad poems section. The poem is brilliant and so very sad. It seems like such a waste for her to die. Definately not a waste of talent though - i love it.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Jen this poem was wow, i cant stop the tears :( this is what my x and i are going thru now, one mistake and shes in too deep, im trying to help but shes pushing everyone aside :(( its a very beautifull poem, may i email it to her?

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    :) no, no, its you and it was your poem :) i know its hard to understand but her and i are in this situation :((
    thank you for the permition i will clearly state its your poem. i read it again today and it broke my heart again. Soo sad but i like it coz i can realte and i wish i didint :'( but i like the poem. XoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by anthony

    Wow u reachout 2 pplz

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is amazing sweetie! This is such a moving poem and it's just purely....amazing! One of the best! I seriously love it!
    xoxo

    P.S. You're one of my favorite writers!