You Never Cared

by Bridgette   Nov 7, 2006


My false barrier of strength
Crumbles whenever I'm alone
Because I've become so weak
Since the truth has been made known

I opened my eyes to realization
Of the fact that you never cared
But I still like to pretend
Because, honestly, I'm scared

Remember when you left me
That long time just for her?
And now you've left again
To be with some other girl

You left me when I needed you
I was so scared without you here
But you never did seem to care
So, alone, I faced my biggest fear

And I thought I'd forgiven you
For that day you left my side
But you never even apologized
For all those months I cried

The truth is, you never loved me
I regret all of the time we shared
Almost two years just wasted away
And now it's me who no longer cares

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  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    My original comment was deleted, and i'm p0ed about that because it was nice and long. grr.
    anyways, again, different. new. exciting, refreshing. the words you use are..you know original, but thats not the word, but you know what i'm saying right? the last paragraph is really said and i'm hoping it isn't true.
    the line "My false barrier of strength"
    woooooooooooow g. flavor flav! sorry, had to do that. but that was SO GOOD! i can't think of a better word, you know, but it was just so great and so good and ughhhhh. ok, sorry, anyway, as flavor flav would say "this girl deserves some mad props g, you know what i'm sayin bro" aka 5;5

  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Sounds quite hard, you made the emotions you felt very clear,
    very well written
    keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Just how i feel about a special someone. it was a lovely poem, well done
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Amazing piece!
    Oh its so great. I loved how you showed all the hurt then just ended it with a kinda defeated line
    "And now it's me who no longer cares"
    I think its great. 5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. This one is better at discription. I loved it. I loved how you ended this poem. Very emotional. And I have been through that so if you ever need me just e-mail me!

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