Wow. I'm speechless. This was amazing. The flow, structure...everything. I loved it. It was PERFECT!!! I'm jealous! Lol. 5/5

Love always,
-Poetess

I am truly impressed. This was a beautiful written poem, with a deep message. I could really relate to it alot, and I just loved it. Great work. Keep it up :)

Wow, this poem is absolutely incredible. i love it =)

x.xBorkenx.x

I love how you write, ur really good... 5/5

The flow was great, it wasnt hard to read at all. I think you did a wonderful job.