Her Own Little World

by Bridgette   Nov 7, 2006


Blinking back the destruction of unshed tears
It's her thoughts of desolation no one hears
Oh, the memories you could find in this place
But no one dares look upon her face

The sun never shines in a place like this
Those rays of hope faded with his bitter kiss
Oppressed memories could confess the lies
Of this broken girl who no longer tries

It's her own little world, where no one else is let in
A secluded place where all her suffering begins

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Wow, your very talented, i loved this poem very sad but yet very good.

    keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    "rays of hope faded with his bitter kiss"
    Now, see, I can't deny you a 5 when you've got a killer line like that, ne! Utterly fabulous work, I'm off to read more. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    Wow, such a short poem packed with so much meaning..i love how you used "bitter kiss"
    your words are so advanced, and so refreshing, i enjoyed, i repeat enjoyed reading this poem.
    nice one, yo. 5;5

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    How... sad. :[
    This is amazing.
    Amazinger than amazing, actually. I like how you dropped it at the end- it seems like a proleuge (sp?) to a good book or something.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. This is a great poem. I enjoyed reading it again.

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