I am still new at this, so any comments could really help. Thanks in advance.

That is so,so beautiful.

YOUR POEM IS GREAT. IT IS SO SWEET SHE IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE A GUY LIKE YOU. KEEP ON WRITING THOSE POEMS THAT YOU WRITE SO WELL BECAUSE YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT. NEVER STOP DREAMING. THANX.

That's such a great and sweet poem!! I love this one too!! You have lots of talent!! Keep it up!! I look forward to reading more!!! :)

Amy

This is very cute indeed :3.

- yu have a real talent . i enjoyed readinq this poem , itts very sweet .