Brilliant Shadows of Lost Dreams

by RadianceInReverse   Nov 8, 2006


Deep shadows and brilliant highlights of things unseen,
a harvest full of lies and animosity.
lost within our own heartbreak and dreams,
we fade into an unknown reality.

Our future slowly becomes our past.
with unwilling urgency we forgo our compassion,
living, breathing for things we can never have.
with an open heart and a set mind,
we leave behind our childhood, our freedom.

Tied down with sorrow and responsibility,
we forget how to be happy, young
becoming what we never wished to become,
we give up all hope.

Our destiny changes, and our memories suddenly become
missing pieces, of an unfinished puzzle.
we become weak, ready to let life end,
sinking into deep shadows,
we think back onto the brilliant highlights
that drifted away,
with our long lost childhood.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I absolutely loved this poem. The title is what really caught my attention. It is very catchy. And the whole poem was just so wonderfully written and seems so well thought out. The only thing that I saw was on the 3rd line of the 1st stanza you have:
    "lost within out own heartbreak and dreams"
    I think the "out" should be "our" But anyways, I absolutely loved this poem. 5/5 Keep it up!