Wow.. I absolutely loved this poem. The title is what really caught my attention. It is very catchy. And the whole poem was just so wonderfully written and seems so well thought out. The only thing that I saw was on the 3rd line of the 1st stanza you have:
"lost within out own heartbreak and dreams"
I think the "out" should be "our" But anyways, I absolutely loved this poem. 5/5 Keep it up!