Awsomers poem!! really good..keep on writing! |
I loved it. It was breath taking and full of detail. Wouldn't change it for the world.=) |
by Ashley
I love this poem...its really deep u got talent! dont stop writin cuz ur good at it. :P lol laterz |
by Jenny
Love the detail in the poem... it is awsome. Keep up the good work. |
by candace
Wow this was a great poem!! keep writing , you could go far with ur poems!!!!! |
by -Usmi-
Its alot diff frm the other poems ive read here...but its still nice in a very diff way ... |
Wow this is a great poem |
*smiles* whoot whoot |
I think its good, keep it up |
This is great I like it a lot, write more for us to read, it would be great to see more of this |
by CY GINDLE
Something diffent from what i usually |
by Veronica
Love it!! |
by kimara4955
Nice poem hun, keep it up, yeh it is diferent thats what makes it good. xxtake carexx |
Nothing like the winter setting in whether it be in nature or the coldness of our hearts. Theres is something unique about this read. It was quite light and the flow was good. I have had these feelings before and thought you done a wonderful job of penning them. Good Job Keep it up. |
by Live WeLL
Wow.. i really like the words you chose for this poem.. very nicely written.. good job and thanks for the comment =] |
by Sharon
You have a way with words, it was so wonderfully descriptive that i could see and feel what you described in your poem. great! |
by Patience
This is cute little description of autumn |
by Adelle
Again the lay out brings alot to this poem have you ever tried writeing a hiaku? I belive you would be very good at this it seams like you have the write style. |
by Michelle18
This poem is good...but i dont think its the best that you've written...i dont like how it is set up...but thats just my opinion and the flow kinda seemed off...i give you a 4/5 on this one. |
by ruth
Wow...that was great. Very deep. Keep it up |