Comments : October Morning

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awsomers poem!! really good..keep on writing!

  • I loved it. It was breath taking and full of detail. Wouldn't change it for the world.=)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    I love this poem...its really deep u got talent! dont stop writin cuz ur good at it. :P lol laterz
    _Ashley_

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Love the detail in the poem... it is awsome. Keep up the good work.
    Jennifer

  • 18 years ago

    by candace

    Wow this was a great poem!! keep writing , you could go far with ur poems!!!!!

    ♥candii

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Its alot diff frm the other poems ive read here...but its still nice in a very diff way ...

  • 18 years ago

    by MisticalMisty.

    Wow this is a great poem

    i love it!

    keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    *smiles* whoot whoot

  • 17 years ago

    by playful_wants_elisabeth

    I think its good, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Godoftheblackflame

    This is great I like it a lot, write more for us to read, it would be great to see more of this

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Something diffent from what i usually
    read . i like it . its really good 5/5
    get back to typing you got it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veronica

    Love it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Nice poem hun, keep it up, yeh it is diferent thats what makes it good. xxtake carexx

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Nothing like the winter setting in whether it be in nature or the coldness of our hearts. Theres is something unique about this read. It was quite light and the flow was good. I have had these feelings before and thought you done a wonderful job of penning them. Good Job Keep it up.
    Thank you for the comments as well.
    Dixie

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow.. i really like the words you chose for this poem.. very nicely written.. good job and thanks for the comment =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Sharon

    You have a way with words, it was so wonderfully descriptive that i could see and feel what you described in your poem. great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    This is cute little description of autumn

  • 17 years ago

    by Adelle

    Again the lay out brings alot to this poem have you ever tried writeing a hiaku? I belive you would be very good at this it seams like you have the write style.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is good...but i dont think its the best that you've written...i dont like how it is set up...but thats just my opinion and the flow kinda seemed off...i give you a 4/5 on this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by ruth

    Wow...that was great. Very deep. Keep it up