by jason Nov 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
What do I do |
by Vanessa
I like the emtions in this poem, they are deep and strong. I felt like the flow was a bit forced in some places, but the message was still clear. You did a good job. 4/5 |
by Alesia
Just to let you know Jas that i voted on most of your poems....Happy now ? but i left comments on the ones i really like. k.good. |