Hey i really liked this poem alot. my boyfriend is in the navy, so i guess we kinda relate.. butijust thought i would let u kno that i kno how u feel.. and very good poem!!!

This was great and I hope that your mom comes back ok. I wish her and your family luck. :)

Some of the rhymes...weren't rhymes. They were a repeat of the words. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha