Say GoodBye

by Ivette   Nov 8, 2006


If you don't tell me goodbye i will cry because my future lays in within your hands and out of my body my mind my heart beat my all is yours so please tell me goodbye.
You've cause me so much pleasure ease in body and in mind, I'm trying to tell you to just say goodbye you cause affliction pain for all these reasons please tell me goodbye, Ive tried to complete my mission but you haven't let me for all these reasons and more say goodbye..

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really liked your poem although i think it would have been even stronger written in a linear style, but of course if thats your preference more power to ya. good job!

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