Comments : A deadly influence....

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is so sad... Beauty is not painful and should never be. It's your heart that counts, not the flesh that surrounds it.
    Such a heartbreaking look into society, I'm afraid it will never change. :(

  • 18 years ago

    by xDieRomanticx

    I dont quite get the meaning behind this one as yet...but it was good all the same XD

  • 18 years ago

    by masked_senses

    False god bless irony...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    That was so beautiful! Girls don't realize how big of a problem that self-conciousness and wanting to look "beautiful" is. Who defines what "beauty" is anyway. Excellent! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I love what your poem stands for and I think that it was something that needed to be written. Keep up the good work; keep your eyes toward the stars. *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Saw an anorexic girl at the airport. Looked like she was out of a concentration camp. More than a well structured and thought provocing poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    How sad...........