Wow! How powerful is that!
I wish i could hear the tune for it cos it sounds like a brilliant song, so many people would be able to relate to it.
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

This is the best thing I've read all morning. Keep writing, your really good at it.

~April~

You no the question u asked for one of my poems 'you did not care' umm...i made it up lol =P

The emotions are are thats for sure, i can relate to some of this :)) its good i like it :))

Aww! the wording is so beautiful, i know how you're feeling. AWESOME job!!!

Hey! Great poem! Well done! Great wording! so Much emotion!
Good flow and metre, although some places in the middle it did get abit jumpy!
Well done! 5/5

Well written

Wow... u got talent, thats for sure.. urs is great, it gets into emotion so people reading can relate.... wow...

Love it ;)
full heaps good, well done.
xx

Love it! I love all your poems/quotes!
xx