by Elynnka Nov 8, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
A beautiful young woman came home late at night, |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I liked the story line. that was nice, but the wording wasn't at as good. the beginning started out nicely, but the wording stopped flowing as much afterward. and i found a typo: |
They beauty of his songs was alluring everyone around |
Hahaha, wow. I am blown away, a poet on this site with some true talent! You have incredibly original ideas and you are excellent and expressing them. 5/5 |
Wowie..that was amazing. you really told an amazing and captivating story. 5/5 |
by sweet melody
Wow that was AMAZING! If that isn't your best work then I don't know what is! I loved it, it had me mezmerized throughout it all. Keep up the good work. :) |