If there was an award for one of the most interesting poems to read, you wouldn't get it. Because this poem is to good for even that.
It was very enjoyable to read, and although you deny it, definitely one of your best.
Well done!

Not your best work?! It was fantastic! I loved the whole thing!!!!! It was so great to read and the rhyme and flow, just amazing!
Ciao xx

Wow that was AMAZING! If that isn't your best work then I don't know what is! I loved it, it had me mezmerized throughout it all. Keep up the good work. :)
-{*Lucy*}

Wowie..that was amazing. you really told an amazing and captivating story. 5/5

Hahaha, wow. I am blown away, a poet on this site with some true talent! You have incredibly original ideas and you are excellent and expressing them. 5/5

They beauty of his songs was alluring everyone around
((The, not 'they'))
Your kind calls it lust and denies it, but I’m in love with this sin…”
((I LOVE this line.. It is amazing. Nothing less.))
And this gorgeous fiend still plays the violin in the full moon night
Alluring their victims, severing their life through one deadly bite…
((A rather poor ending with a cliche rhyme.))

This is very interesting. You think you are reading the tale of two secret lovers, but then such a shocker at the end. I find that the end disappointed me abit.. I was waiting for the chills to creep in when I knew what the story's full affect was, but I did not recieve such chills.
However, this is well written. I felt your vocabualry could have expanded a bit in some places and more describing could have been done. (Since it was already long, why not longer? Lol.)
I also felt that in some places there was cliche rhyimg...Which really ruined the effect for me... But, it is still very interesting to read.
A wonderful story told, all in all, and it does deserve a five.
My suggesion: Expand your vocabulary a little.. the cliche rhyming will go away with that as well. Describe a bit more.

I think that is it. Wonderful job. Hope this isn't too harsh for you.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

I liked the story line. that was nice, but the wording wasn't at as good. the beginning started out nicely, but the wording stopped flowing as much afterward. and i found a typo:
They beauty of his songs -- THE