This one seems a bit different then the writings you usually do...or maybe its just me. either way, its a wonderful piece.
Kepp writing, and try to stay safe, strong, and healthy.
*AntiSocial16*

Usualy u rite sht, diz isnt AS bad, dfrnt tho.

Hmm... an intresting read. Im confused to why itsi n the Life section of the website. But i guess it is a part of life. ANywyas the structure of this kinda threw me of, i dont know but i just felt like it was oging to be long and draging. Maybe if you split it into stanza's it would of helped. But then maybet hats just me. You dont seem to have a pacific rhyme scheme going hear, but i like the flow of it. I like the description that youve used, it workes really well. The vocabulary was great, i abosolotely loved that bit baout the poem. Great description. SO yeah keep writing! xx