Really nice poem and very true..
keep it up.. :)

Wow, ive had a friend like this before, luckily not long after everyone else around realized that she was a fake b.i.t.c.h!!! lol... again i loved this poem, was awesome, and the rhythm and flow was excellent.. 5/5

Aww. This one was sad. It sounds as if you were once close with your friends, and then all of a sudden, you guys like...split up or something. Well I know just how that feels. And writing about it helps loads. =)

The flow was pretty good on this one. I liked the descriptions and the story you made. But emotion would be a plus in this poem. Try putting more emotion into your poems. It'll help with the flow, and it'll most likely help get your feelings out and in the open. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha