by Jenni Marie Nov 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
When things don't go your way...stay strong |
by Leanne
I liked this poem, kinda suits the mood i've been in lately as you know. reading that then i could picture you standing there sayin it lol =D |
by N M Lambert
Hey, thought the repetition worked really well in this. you gave a very good message... nice poem xx |
I thought that you repeated yourself too much. With all the "stay strong"'s. It was a little much for me. I mean, you went into a little emotion, but not enough. You said that you wanted to die. But you didn't say how you felt about dying. If you catch my drift. |
This poem is trully inspiration.... we need more poems like it and more poets like u, but then i guess u wouldnt be so unique would u?? i enjoy reading ur poems... 100/5 |