This poem is trully inspiration.... we need more poems like it and more poets like u, but then i guess u wouldnt be so unique would u?? i enjoy reading ur poems... 100/5

I thought that you repeated yourself too much. With all the "stay strong"'s. It was a little much for me. I mean, you went into a little emotion, but not enough. You said that you wanted to die. But you didn't say how you felt about dying. If you catch my drift.

The flow was off in some places, but no one's perfect at flow. =P The rhymes seemed cliche again to me. Just keep on working at those rhymes. If you need to, there are sites that help you rhyme words. And they give you HUGE varieties. Improving the rhymes will improve the piece. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hey, thought the repetition worked really well in this. you gave a very good message... nice poem xx

I liked this poem, kinda suits the mood i've been in lately as you know. reading that then i could picture you standing there sayin it lol =D