Oh I liked this one. It had a lot more depth than the other 2 before this one. It had more than just a story to it. It was like you were trying to pour out your feelings.

The flow was a little off, and the rhyming was still a little cliche, but you'll get it. I also think this should be under sad poems instead. Just some suggestions. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, another great poem, u are trully talented, how come i havnt discovered u earlier?? lol.. u r definately on my favs list..