This poem could've used a lot more emotion in it. It seems as if you're only letting the reader see the outside of what was happening. If you put more emotion into it, the poem would improve so much more.

You went from 4 lines in a stanza, to 3 and then back to 4 again. Unless this was intentional, it was a mistake. =P Lol. Just got caught up in this one as well. 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, another GREAT poem... im so happy that u r feeling stronger and ur not giving into life and its horrors, seeing the positive in life is always harder then giving into the negative.. i dont even no u and yet i am proud of u..lol, keep it up, ur poems are inspiration 5/5

"Life is just a game
And now I'm ready to play
I am finally ready
To do things MY way."

Tell it like it is sistah!! *cough* lol
But seriously. You hit the nail on the head with this one. And i loved the last line.
Perfect
*Gem*