Comments : The Question Of The Soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    I love it:)
    I really like:

    Through broken glass and shattered lives.
    Our insanity brings us near.
    Here lies our future.

    and:
    What lies ahead will seek us well.
    The question of the soul.

    what I don't like is: Put the pieces back so whole.

    but I gave you a 5/5
    great work

  • 18 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    The sincerity of how it was written
    makes me smile inside:)

  • 18 years ago

    by RaNdOmRoB

    Hey haley thx for the comment.
    I like this poem great job.

    From Rob