What you used to tell me

by Barbi Taylor   Nov 8, 2006


What you used to tell me
was that you loved me so
What you used to tell me
was that you'd never go

what happened to what you used to say?
Why did every thing we used to have go away?

You broke my heart,
Shattered it to dust
and all because of your
inappropriate lust

there is nothing left for for me to say, in fact i dont even care...

what you used to tell me
is that you wanted forever
what you used to tell me
was lets make a great endeavor

what happened to our plan
i guess i was stuck in la la land

One week its love
the next is silence
then it boils down to hatred

i don't understand how you think you can treat me like i am nothing

What you used to tell me
is that i was the one
what you used to tell me
was we would always have fun
What you used to tell me
was that you'd never leave
what you used to tell me
is starting to make me grieve

What you used to tell me
is you'd never let me cry
what you used to tell me
was that you'd never lie
what you used to tell me
has got me so confused
and now my mind is mentally abused

what you used to tell me
i now realize
was nothing more than a string of lies

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Excellente

  • 17 years ago

    by Jorge Luis

    Fantastic job Barbi line by line...Really loved the flow and emotion you put into it....5/5...Keep writing shorty, and God bless...:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awwww angel i hope your ok, this poem is fantastic, and it made me shed a tear, i didint think i still could after everyting that ive been thru in the past 3 months but wow this one is great thank you :))

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    Loved it. I remember some of things she used to tell me, and now it's not the same. and I can't handle it. but I loved this, good stuff :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cathy

    I really like this poem it reminds me of how I feel right now, sometimes I think im getting over my kids dad but than I start thinking of things he use to say I just get depressed again. Anyways Im sure you didn't want to know all that so again great poem! Comment on one of mine sometime.