Panthera Leo (ethree)

Wow. thats all i have to say. i've never seen this done before where the syllables went up one in almost every line other than the first two and the last two. amazing. great poem. i liked the topic too it was very unique.

Awesome poem. Loved the imagery.

It was missing some detail, didnt really interest me, althouh it was a good topic and you have pulled off a tricky style, well done
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Ooh, this was great hun. The descripitons were powerful and really added effect. The imagery was great and I could almost imagine the picture. It was just missing a little bit of detail for my liking, but I know it is hard when you have a rhyme scheme to follow. The flow was good as well. All in all, very nicely done! 5/5

Wow, I honestly usually don't like this type of poem but this one was really good. Keep ip the great work and that perfect flow.

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