by Darien Nov 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Right Here |
by kayla T
This is really good ! keep it up! |
by Goth
I really liked this poems ... even though the flow was a little broken... excellent job!5/5 |
by Brittany C
This is a wonderful poem. And it is easy to relate to. 5/5 |
by Jessica
Awhhh, that was so sweett Darienn. The flow was good as were the descriptions. The emotion was strong too and I loved the story in it. The only thing that could have been improved was the use of "I, she, you, etc." But other than that, nice job. 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Aww.. that is such a sweet and beautifully written poem. I loved all of it. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up very well. And I absolutely love the adorable story you had going on in it. Great job on this! You definitely are a very talented poet! Keep it up & take care! 5/5 |