Right Here

by Darien   Nov 8, 2006


Right Here

I'm a city boy looking for a country girl
But I've searched all over the world
Who would have thought you were right here
When I thought I had looked everywhere

You never know what you have until it's gone
I was lucky I never waited that long
I never realized how much you meant to me
Until you were about to leave the country

I drove to the airport to convince you to stay
You had gone so far there seemed to be no way
I grabbed your arm to stop you from going through
I kissed your lips and I told you I loved you

You stood in silence and waited a while
When you turned around you had a huge smile
The words you've waited for finally came
Gazing into my eyes you told me you felt the same

I had traveled all around the world
Looking for that one special girl
All of them seemed so wrong
But you were right here.. all along

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  • 17 years ago

    by kayla T

    This is really good ! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth

    I really liked this poems ... even though the flow was a little broken... excellent job!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This is a wonderful poem. And it is easy to relate to. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhhh, that was so sweett Darienn. The flow was good as were the descriptions. The emotion was strong too and I loved the story in it. The only thing that could have been improved was the use of "I, she, you, etc." But other than that, nice job. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that is such a sweet and beautifully written poem. I loved all of it. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up very well. And I absolutely love the adorable story you had going on in it. Great job on this! You definitely are a very talented poet! Keep it up & take care! 5/5