Hey... This was really good. It kinda puts my thoughts into words about how I feel for this one guy. Although I think he already knows that I like him... I wish he just knew how much he meant to me... and how I long to be held into his arms kinda thing. ya know? But nice poem... Keep writing... u got skill...

I know exactly how you feel! I hate it so much because i truely like this guy, but we just dont see eye to eye. Your poem was great! Keep writing, and keep your head up. Tootlez...