Solitudes Mask

by Nyx   Nov 8, 2006


An empty heart
An empty Soul
Is what you'll reveal once
you remove the Mask

My smiles now seem painted on
like on a doll.
The indifference clenches my laughter.

I once laughed
I once felt some sensation coursing through me
Now i'm merely a shadow that exists.

Will my deceit creating my mask ever diminish?
When will my inner struggle of forbidden secrets forsake me and let me love life.

i have to fix some things-oo-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Damn you...why didn't you tell me that you were a clown and a poet? I guess its not really a surprise that you are decent at this stuff...but thats just gonna make me try harder from now on you know

    -Jason-

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    When will my inner struggle of forbidden secrets forsake me and let me love life.

    these lines is sumthin most ppl can relate to.. an amazing poem.. really like it..

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Sometimes we ware the mask for fear of what others will see...

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Omg ...this one is rele amazing ... keep it up ..

  • 18 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Well Well Well, i must say...damn good, as much as id like to say other wise. I give credit where credit is due. Keep up the good work but i hope u can find ur solution

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