Lovely write

Good poem. Never let the fear of striking out keep u from playin the game :)

Wow, thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Have you any ideas what I could change the line would you shoot me with this gun to because I only wrote that as it's the only thing I could think of lol ... 5/5. Brilliant poem, thank you once again =) xxx

This is a really good poem I like it a lot =]. Oh and thanx 4 the comment on my poem

Thanks your an awsome writer i love this poem =]

I liked this poem, I think there are a few things that should be reworded, so that it would flow a little better, but all in all. Good job. =)
-Ally