I really like the ending line, and the "does he..." part. 5/5. keep it up.

Number one-dont reminacnce its hard not to do but its not good for you. anyways what happened happened and it suxs but all u can do is tell her how u feel and never give up and whose asking you to fake that smile? no one urself thats who. so hang in there its gonna be okay. again excellent stuff.

Lissa