Ooo. I liked this one. It had a lot of meaning. I know I judge people before I actually get to know them. Hehe. Bad me.

This meant a lot. Like to me, personally, and probably to all of mankind. I mean, who doesn't look at at least SOMEONE and is just like 'WOW'. Hardly any of us. And you established that in this poem.

I liked the way you said that physical attraction was a burden, but also a key 'ingredient' I guess you could say in a relationship.

The flow was good, and I didn't think the rhymes were too cliche or forced or anything. This piece was rather well thought out. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great job. This is totally true about human beings. It is just a fact that appearance does effect everything, I don't think that will ever change. I know I have a tendency to judge people just by looking at them, I know I shouldn't but I just do. Guilty. :(

Great poem though because it does face the facts of life and it gives everyone reading this poem a much needed dose of reality.

Good flow, imagery, and vocabulary too! :) You're a fantastic writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thx for the comment too, it meant a lot to me. 5/5

Stephanie♥

I really like this poem. Just the honesty in it made it an amazing poem. It is so true and I'm sure that many people feel the same. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well && so did the rhyming. You did an amazing job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Very good poem. ANd very true. another 5/5.

Oh wow...
I LOVED this.
It was very deep, well written and thought out well, and I loved the wording, imagery and rhyme scheme.

This has to be one of my favourites on the site.

This was excellent. Everything you wrote about was true; most people do tend to judge a person on their outer appearance.

Great job. There was just one little thing I noticed --

"The whole world is shallow
Lets just face the fact.
Isn't a person on this land,
Who an appearance won't distract."

Shouldn't the third line read: "THERE isn't a person on this land,"?

Anyhow, amazing job.

Wow.. this poem is sadly very true... but written really well.. its very unique and clever.. the rhymes were great and the flow was flawless .. wonderful job.. my only suggestion it that i think in the last stanza is should be "in THE shallow word we live" not "In a shallow world we live"

I really like it. Nice job. No errors as far as I can see. But I am not one to jude on stanza's or lines, or even puncuation. Everyone does it a different way. Thanks for pointing out the spelling in my profile, and the honest feedback lol. Not something people tend to give me especially when all they want is a comment in return. I really like how you make a point.

"Look at boys checkin' girls.
And girls checkin' boys.
"Looks" play with your feelings.
Like children with toys."

But I reallly disliked this stanza. It didn't seem to have any poetic rhythm to it. It just sounds like the lyrics to a rap song. (just in my opinion atleast.) It seems a little off. But everything else seems good.

peace

~skittz

That is soooo true. How many people fall for someone just because of their looks? And how many people get hurt bacause they are not the best looking person. Trust me i know that feeling.
Great poem. 5/5

Kalee

So true...people only see the outside first. you havta get to know a person before your eally know em
5/5

Sad but true, apperances do matter.. to an extent. great poem.
much love and many kisses,
bex

I love it Leeza! And it's not sad or anything! (:

I know lol..improvement:)