by Jessica
I love that, its really well written! |
by Gem
"You think I can't love you |
by Aure
The ending is very surprising and really shows something of real love. It's something to think deeply about it. The cause of the pain must be very hard but that you are able to still love her really means something. |
by nicole
I agree with jess, i love this one. |
by Al
Dude, thx the comments and wish i could have as much time as you got...lol, yeh so this poem is awesome, see so you have some good amazing love poems here. I'm gonna go and agree with people above your last line hit me right in a heart and i thought to myself that is real love, anyhoo write more poems like this..kl peace |
by beav
Dude, you're blowin' my mind with every line. i mean ALL your work. so good. |
by fakesmile
I swear i love this poem! thanks for the comment.. its nice to know that you're not alone and ppl can feel your pain too.. |
by broken heart
Well i cutt to let out pain and were i live u cant stay away from the drugs hes bin to mercy for the drugs and hes bin to jail he still hasnt faced realality and i hope u get better i live in illinios and ive tryed getting help for my addition but like i said im 14 and stubborn |
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