I love your poems it is really, when i said people still comment i read your litte post on the diccustion board (can't spell)

Wow, very long, and different, but i liked it alot..... got confused in sum bits but i think u made an excellent effort 4/5

Its excellent how u portray Ana, and how it takes over young lives one after another...

xxDeLie

By the way thank you for commenting on my german poem :P ya i don't like german teachings either :P
Thanks again
xxDeLie

By the way thank you for commenting on my german poem :P ya i don't like german teachings either :P
Thanks again
xxDeLie

This is a great poem and you've described the way 'ana' controlls people really vividly. The sad ending emphasises the effect anorexia can have on people.

Imi xxx