The love that never was

by Mitchel   Nov 9, 2006


Love,
it pushes the limits of
two hearts,
two minds,
two spirits.
A misunderstanding can lead to confused love,
destorying the heart,
breaking the mind,
crushing the spirit.
For I first hand have suffered this blow.
The pain is unbearable,
The sorrow unthinkable.
My heart,
a thousand pieces,
my mind,
a darkened abyss of thoughts,
and
my spirit a field of destruction.
Love its complicated and if it never was to be let the sadness flow...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. wonderful poem. good use of wording. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Aunt Michelle

    I know exactly how u feel, I just broke up with the guy I was with for 2and 1/2 years. I give u a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx

    You need to put a few more comma's in here and there for example
    A misunderstanding can lead to misunderstood love.
    But a comma between Misunderstood and can. I'm sure you'll figure out the rest but uh heres where else you need them.
    The Sorrow unthinkable (between sorrow and unthinkable)
    My heart a thousand pieces(between heart and a)
    My mind a darkened abyss of thoughts (mind and a)
    My spirit a field of destruction(spirit and a)
    Other than that the poem was well written!

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