It was good overall but you could have chosen better choice of words though other than that i hope you and your lover make it through me and my bf have been together for 9 monthes and i have my parents thinking he's a friend while my big sis knows the truth if we've made it this far i'm sure you two can too!!

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. I CAN ABSOLUTELY UNDERSTAND WHAT UR GOIN THROUGH. KEEP THESE POEMS COMING. THEY'RE REALLY GOOD. P.S... THANX FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM. I WILL KEEP EM COMING

I just don't know why you want to keep it as a secret or maybe he's someone you don't want people to know about or whatever. but anyways this was a great poem i might have to say. Like Sweet Surrender said && i do agree you could've used better choice in words but hey! that's okay sometimes i don't so it's all good && your new to this site so it's okay. but anyways i liked this poem.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever. also thanks for commenting my poems means alot to me.

Awwh, this was really sad.
I found it very powerful and moving, i really liked the wording, but i found the flow in some places jumpy.

God oh God
Why'd You give it to me
When yYou knew it wasn't right for me

the reason i capitalized the above letters is because - no matter what, when you're talking too or about God you always capitalize everything that has to do with Him

I'm in SO much pain

other than that this is a good poem! i like it!

Aww, very cute, very pleading, i liked it. nice write

Awww..well, just to answer
"Why'd you give it to me
When you knew it wasn't right for me?"
From personal experience, we will always meet someone new, no matter what! So what ever we may be feeling with that someone we so-call love now, well, it'll heal in time =)
I don't know if that helps.
Anyway, back to the poem. I thought it was great! Well done! =)
5/5

Personally, and this dosn't have to mean anything if you don't want it to, it has potential, but isn't quite there yet, it dosn't quite flow, but you do have skill, no doubt