It was good, but I didn't feel that it flowed as well as it could've.

Omg i love itt.
is so like.. postive! haha i love itt. it flows really good for mee! 5/5!

Awe, the ending was really cute and sweet. It wasn't one of the best poems I have ever read, but it was really cute. Your rhyming scheme could have been better and you could have used better word choice. The flow was above average, as was the imagery. Nice- 4/5.