by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa Nov 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I'd never think twice, |
by EmOToMbOy13
Not bad. good job |
by Ichigo
Awesome poem Alvin. |
by Stacey
Even tho i write very short poems too, and this may be hypocracy, i think that you need to keep the same amount of lines but extend how many words are on each line. it just seems that youre not getting enough detail into it. I know its hard when you need a new idea for each stanza and you dont want to introduce a new idea, so the work-around is adding more words. :) |
That was great. I loved it. |