Great poem i loved it

... I was a bit scared. I sort of realized, oh wait.. I'm not baby brother! I'm big brother! lol

A very emotional piece sis! You really captured a heart-wrenching event. Losing someone you love, and then being alone. I don't really know what is more depressing than that. Well done SWAMCE sis!! You really expressed yourself in this one, and that is the poetry I liked of yours best!

WOWEE!!!

lubbed it! abosotively lubbed it!

my favorite stanza was
"Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
Begging for the chance to erase goodbye,
And the running mascara from her eyelash,
Which tarnished her skin from the tears she cries."

um... and now i must go to school... so bye bye!

Allanah

WOW! That is so good! You should write a book! 5/5++!

U write ur poems so go0d very well written this one. i always admire ur various styles in writing and how well u write them. xx

WOW! Taleee that was amazing. Wow. This was just excellent. The descriptions were filled with detail and every word you used held meaning. The flow was effortless and the emotion was so powerful. Wow, this was really excellent and so so sad. Wonderful work hun, Ily and cheer upp! 5/5

Wow that's realy sad!!