I wish

by Krzysztof J   Nov 9, 2006


I wish you didn't have to go,
I wish this was a dream,
I wish i never found this out,
I wish that you weren't so mean,

I wish that you would still smile,
Like when i was with you,
I wish that i could dry your tears,
And build your life anew,

I wish so bad upon that star,
I'm wishing day and night,
I just would want one more chance,
To make you life alright,

I do not care about myself,
I know I'll be just fine,
I wish this wouldn't end so fast,
I'll swap your life for mine,

I wish i could lose my life,
And my warm soul too,
If only it could fix yours up,
Id do it just for you!

I wish that you would understand,
Just what you mean to me,
I wish you knew i do love you,
For all eternity,

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  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Awww...another poem that I just love! Thank you so much for your comments, I love love loved them! You're so sweet...and yeah...reading your poems I feel the same way, like I can totally relate to them...I don't know what it is. If we are going through the same stuff at the same time or what..it is interesting though. Well, I'm looking forward to reading more of your amazing poem...so start writing! lol I will talk to you later..oh oh oh! Maybe your next poem will be about a found love...hmmm. That would make me soooo happy! But if not..keep looking! I'm here for you! Buh-bye!!!
    Burning~Wings
    p.s. what's your name?

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    The longer they are the more painful they become. it flows so well. ur wish is soo strong. gr8 job:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I love your poems!
    They are like some kind of inspiration, especially when i get such lovely comments!
    5/5 as always hun
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    Aww i really lked it its sad but i liked it.. i like all your poems 5/5

    georgia

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