What an excellent poem. full of emotion that so many ppl can relate to, i like how u tell it like it is but still use poetic language

Everybody struggles at times and things don't just get better over night they take time but eventually it will all work out. This is a fantastic poem with so much meaning great job 5/5

The imagery...wow...
You have a lot of talent..
I thought the wording was brilliant and the whole piece flowed very well.

I thought it said 'cooking' in a butterfly world. Didn't know what was going on! Good poem though...

I thought that this was different from most poems & that's what made me like it. The words you used were great. 5/5

Not one of my favs. it was about a 4/5 I love the title though because it is unique.. the title is just as important as the poem! ;) keep up the good work..

I really found this poem to be creative and the imagery was just amazing, this poem was full of emotion im sure alot of people can relate to this. Well done ~mel

This is entirely unique I love the journey that this poem takes you thought. A perfect ending you ate very talented.