+.+ F.u.c.k.in.g Hell! That's so so sososososo sad. +.+

Wow girl, long but totally priceless! It felt more like a TV show, or me standing watching it happen! It was full of emotion and it was just really good,
-AnnMarie

Great poem it realy gets to u and touches u . i realy liked it

This poem got my emotions running like crazy, A tricky subject to write about, but you managed to make the reader interested and care about the character.

The length when I first spotted it made me slightly apprehensive, but you kept me enraptured throughout the poem.

I reckon you could get rid off all the full stops and let the poem flow of it's own accord.

A great, thought provoking write. Well done!

Keep writing
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Gee this is the best poem i have ever read even though it was long and hurtful but it was one of the best poems!!

Omfg

i love love love this poem

how can you write this...

thats so sad...i swear if i everfind out anybody i know is goin threw that..ill..kill somone...this world is full of evil...

well n e ways
really good poem keep up the good work

That was a brillant LOOOONG poem.....it was sad...and i liked it, but its a 4/5 no no, its a 5/5 my bad....i am too tired to delet my mistake, so yeah, i liked it it was sad and yeah......Keep up the great work!

Omg when I read this I could feel the pain in the poem it was harsh this poem gets a 5/5 from me cause of the pain.

Omg i hate that and your poem was very great and deep... r u depressed because it sounds k=like it ... d0ont get offended i just wondered.... it was great good job!

OMG I WANNA CRY BUT THAT WAS SOO GOOD

Wow, this poem has gone a long way!.. Well done. I'm glad I was the first :)

So so so damn sad:( especialy the sexual bit

That was a really great read. For such length you managed to not only maintain strong pace and flow but a rhyme scheme that didn't come across as forced.
I loved it. There was so much detail and so many twists within the poem and it was great to maintain the wording and structure throughout.
If I'd have done a poem as long as that my rhythm would have gone 1/2 way through so you muct be a really good poet to keep it throughtout. I enjoyed reading it; 5/5.
Much love, Emma xoxox

Forgot to add .... I love this stanza ...
The pain as he took my virginity
The humiliation as he used me for a game
The anger at what he did to me
The sadness when I realized he's insane.

Much love, Emma xox

O my goodness..this is amazing...wow...it made me cry...5/5

Thats really good, it brings the reader into the situation and is really emotional. Bravo

Just beautiful. So well written. 5 from me, and keep writing! ^^

I'm speechless. This poem made me cry. I can relate to this piece in a way. I was never beat, but I think you get the picture. I can tell that you put alot of thought into this and you did an excellent job. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Wow!! its so decriptive. its amazing, your words flow today. its like im stand in the corner watching all this. i dont know wat else to say. but wow

Omg thats a great poem. really sad. i hope it really didnt happen..well i kno u didnt take ur life cuz u wrote it ya know..but i mean i've known some ppl that have been in a situation like that. its hard 2 live with no1 sum1 u want to love doesnt care....but i hope ur ok! much luv..kt
ps: great poem really deep and emotional!! 5/5!