This is a sad and meaningful poem..its awsome...congrats u r awsome at writing dis...

Wow, that was just, wow... that made me wanna cry! it was just amazing, really! and the last two lines were a total twist!! the flow was a little off, there may be some things you could change in it, it wasn't an acceptionally good write in technical literary terms, but it had the impact of a wonderful writer... great job really! 5/5

Wow, you really know how to touch a nerve inside the readers, don't you?

That was so incredibly sad... and somewhat sick, but the writing was fabulous. Extreme talent.

Wow... that's all i have to say... it was just great... such a sad story... such a beautiful poem... while i was reading it, i didnt notice how long it was... i was focused on the story... just great... i cant even express myself right now... still in awe of your poem... wow...

~angel~

That was hnestly amazing i hope it isnt real 4 ur sake! that was bootifully written almost made me cry!! xxchristinaxx

Very sad indeed. I truly hope it was just a write and not a cry for help. You really touched my heart with pain for the child thats wounded. If is true keep writting, healing is given in expressing.

This 1 was heartbreaking... plz b okay; no 1 deserves 2 b treated this way...

great sense of rhyming and emotion... it's good to let it out...

Very moving, almost had me crying, trying to blink away the tears